January 2007 Open Competiton Entries

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Firstly, an appeal. Can all entrants ensure their entry is given a title. And can you try and make the filename the same or very similar to the title too – makes publishing to the internet easier for Si.
 

Secondly, your picture will nearly always look better if you put a frame around it – its not so bad on the gallery – but on the voting page on the website, they can look a little less than perfect. And you don’t need photoshop to do a border – photofilter is a freeby and works very well.

 

Untitled
Mark says: I like the three towers, works well compositionally. Good amount of detail in the sky. The first tower seems to have blown highlights on the brickwork.

Ron Says:

A nice shot with straight verticals and level horizontals. A little more depth of field so that more of the building was in good focus would have been better.
This building is worth a few revisits as the angles and curves are great.

 
The Hiker
Mark Says;

The main subject is quite small in the picture, but is sat pretty well in the frame and is walking into the picture up the diagonally placed path and road. I don’t like the telegraph pole as it is – either shouldn’t be there or should see the top – just bugs me as is.

Ron Says:

A good try and I do like parts of this shot.
Try cropping out the left including the large pole and, the bottom so that the road is no longer visible.
The eye is then drawn into the shot and the hiker.

 
Untitled - Still life
Mark Says;

An interesting shot – I quite like it, but I almost wish the far bottle was also a candle – things just work better in threes!

Good colours and great mood.

Ron Says:

Something different with this shot and it works. I would have made the glass and the front sheet the centre of focus then it would have been great.
It would have worked well in the themed area as the poem is by Burns and January is Burns month.

 
A Boat named Prosperity
Mark Says;

There is a lot to like in this shot. I like the angle, the perspective and the view up the key is nicely out of focus to define the boat edge.

However, I don’t like the blue on the doors at the top – it pulls the eye too much. And the shot lacks punch; seems to be a bit flat. I would also have cropped it just a touch to get rid of the white edge at the left.

Ron Says:

This shot has too many distracting things going on in it. It is a good subject that I don’t think worked as well as it could.

 

Steam in Minature

Mark Says;

I would have preferred a much tighter crop into the engine – the people on the back don’t add anything for me – the photographer may have taken it because there was someone they knew on the train.

Its also under quite harsh lighting which has produced some hard shadows.

Not my favourite I’m afraid.

Ron Says:

Unless you are a steam fan this is just another family snap. If it had been of the engine alone it would have been better

 
Under the Humber
Mark Says;

This is generally a good shot. There are several things that I think could be done to improve it however.

Move position so that the railing is out of shot. Move just a little to the right so that the bridge is more central. Exposure is difficult due to the sky and under bridge being so far apart. I would have probably taken two shots exposed for the two elements and blended into one shot in post. The shadow/highlight tool may work in Photoshop too.

But back to the positives, the perspective of the bridge is great, really makes it look big! The sky does have some detail which is a lot better than just a washed out white sky

Ron Says:

A different slant to photographing the Humber Bridge that has some appeal. The exposure has been well balanced between the bridge and the sky.
Giving the bridge just a little central position would have helped a bit.

 
Country Mill Manchester
Mark Says;

I look at this shot and see 4 elements to it. The foreground, the river, the red bank and finally the mill.

For me, this is not working – but that could be me! The reason being that there are 4 elements and there is nothing really linking them.

Ron Says:

A good shot with all of the right ingredients, water, trees, a building but with just a little to much foreground.
Boosting the contrast would have lifted it a bit and may have helped but even without that it is still good.

 
Swan Lake
Mark Says;

Nice enough shot of the two swans, but they are over exposed and a bit blown out.

Ron Says:

A lot of water but saved by the ripple and good light.
The swans are in some parts a little blown in the highlights. Still for all that I like it.
I have never managed to get a good well exposed shot of a swan for myself.

 
North Landing (at Flamborough)
Mark Says;

I’m guessing this is the same author as the earlier boat shot. Its got a fair bit going for it, but I think more could have been made of the rocks to frame the shot better. It also looks a little flat to me.

Ron Says:

A good shot with a lot of interest but is it just me or do some of the shots this month lack the contrast that would give them a good lift.
A good shot just the same.

 
Blue Eyes - SECOND
Mark Says;

This is a fabulous shot! This is one of a few shots when popping the colour really does work.

The chin of the cat is slightly obscured by something and the fur is slightly blown on the right side.

But this should do well.

Ron Says:

If the shot is of a cat and the shot like this one is good then II like it.
The focus is on the eyes as it should be and the cat is looking directly into the lens. The expression is also good.
A bit more of the cat in focus would have been better as the right is a little confused.
The Eyes Have It

 
Eagle at Lunch
Mark Says;

This is one of mine. What irritates me is the white blob at the top – but my quick attempts at removing it didn’t work – and I ran out of time and patients!

Ron Says:

A lovely shot with the subject well placed in the frame. It is a pity about the light blob at the top right and the marks of sensor dust.
A good shot to add to the wild life portfolio.

 
Welsh River
Mark Says;

My second. I just liked it!

Ron Says:

This is a nice winter shot that holds my eye in the frame. Well done

 
Well,it helpd to pass the time
Mark Says;

Good fun shot which doesn’t need much explanation! Just seems a little washed out, but that could be fixed in post with a little contrast I think

Ron Says:

A fun shot but it is just that.

 
Color of Winter
Mark Says;

Good composition, the house is sat on the thirds, but is possibly a little high – I would have liked to have seen more room above it - not much, just a bit.

There is a nice leading diagonal into the shot.

Good effort.

Ron Says:

A good subject with your eye being lead in from left to right, but it lacks the punch needed to lift it up. It’s a bit flat it needs more contrast.

 
Refelctions and Mist - WINNER
Mark Says;

Another fabulous shot. The tree line and the water line on the left draw the eyes into the picture, right into the break in the trees.

Should be somewhere near or at the top of the pile!

Ron Says:

Great sky, great reflections and some mist have come together to make a great shot.
One small point of distraction is the small point of white to the bottom left

 
Immature Bald Eagle
Mark Says;

Great portrait of the eagle. Lighting and pose are perfect.

What else can I say?

Ron Says:

Good well focused shot against a plain sky that sets the eagle of well.

 
Into the caraffe - Joint THIRD
Mark Says;

A well executed abstract shot. Cropping it square with the whole of the outer ring in shot would have made it better I think.

Ron Says:

A shot that I liked when it was filling my screen, the larger picture made me think that each tiny bubble was a small universe with some thing in each one. Well done

 
Bubble Resting
Mark Says;

I like this shot overall. The two bright spots at the bottom pull the eye away a bit too much, but the bubble is sat nicely in the top third of the shot.

Good effort.

Ron Says:

Strange but interesting so not a lot I can say.

 
Steel Structure
Mark Says;

Almost perfectly symmetrical, this works really well. The flare in the centre could be removed if wanted quite easily.

Well done.

Ron Says:

This is a good try at a difficult subject and I don’t think it worked to well.
The lens flair at top centre seemed to spoil it for me.
If the sun had been a little higher it may have worked better.

 
Amazing Mosaic - Joint THIRD
Mark Says;

The title says it all really. Perhaps a little more saturation and its not perfectly central top to bottom. But it’s a great shot all the same.

Should do well.

Ron Says:

Good colour radiating from the edges drawing your eye to the lovely colours in the centre.
This is well done