June 2010 Open Competition Entries
Crits this month are by Alan C and Big__Col
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Aqualegia |
Aqualegia – Nicely framed image with good use of DoF to throw any background distractions completely out of focus. This is a nice flower image but can’t help thinking it may be a touch underexposed, the colours don’t seem to be as vibrant as they perhaps should. |
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Burbage Brook |
Burbage Brook – Good selection of shutter speed to get a sense of the action of the water and fairly well exposed. I do, however, find the untidy branch/twigs on the right of frame distracting, not sure if a slightly different shooting position was possible to avoid the overhanging vegetation. |
Alan C says |
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Dovestones Reservoir |
Dovestones Reservoir – Nice scene that suits the “vintage treatment” applied and the sepia tones work pretty well. Just a pity the three modern cars can be seen so clearly at the side of the building. The light vignette works fairly well but personally I would have liked it to be a touch more subtle. Good work though. |
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Eagle Alighting |
Eagle Alighting – Impressive shot and kudos for “capturing the moment”. Great action shot of a majestic bird. I am going to be brutally honest here though, the selective colour treatment just kills the image for me. I know this is a personal thing but I would have much rather this image was all colour or all b&w. |
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Gone to lunch |
Gone to Lunch – This doesn’t really work for me. It is a good record shot of a nice bike but doesn’t really say much more to me. Can’t help thinking the composition could have been more dynamic and avoidance of cutting off the screen would have helped. |
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Goosander |
Goosander – Nicely captured but the bird looks to be out of focus. |
Alan C says |
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Little Moreton Hall |
Little Moreton Hall – I like this. Well composed and good play with light. I particularly like the colourful light cast at the lower left of the frame. The exposure looks to have been well controlled under what looks to be difficult conditions. The book or folder on the bench also adds a bit of interest (I wondered if a seated person would have lifted the image further?). Great work. |
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Llama |
Llama – Geez a kiss!! Nice close up portrait but there are a couple of aspects that let the image down. The composition would have been better if the eyelashes had not been severed at left of frame and more of the bottom lip was included. The animals face also looks a bit soft, not sure if this is down to slight movement and a long lens? |
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Not so Busy Bee |
Not so Busy Bee – Very well captured. Great pose and he sure does look a lazy sod. Can’t really fault this one – nicely exposed, nice bokeh/DoF, well framed and very sharp. Cracking image. Stand out favourite of mine. |
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One man and his tripod |
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One Man and His Tripod – sorry but this one does nothing for me. Looks underexposed, not quite a silhouette and not enough detail to work for me. |
Alan C says |
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Rushup Edge |
Rushup Edge – Nice landscape with interesting sky and some hikers on the path to add another dimension. Not sure if it is due to upload resolution but it looks a touch noisy, perhaps oversharpened? Good image though. |
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Sacred |
Sacred – Very nice image, lovely sunburst through the trees and a lovely golden glow. Good point of view with the grave tablets (don’t know what else to call them) giving the image context. |
Alan C says |
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Salford Quays |
Salford Quays – This is a shot with a lot of potential but it just looks too soft. Not sure if it would have been better with the sun slightly lower in the sky. Good effort. |
Alan C says |
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Swan |
Swan – Nice portrait shot. These blighters are hard to expose correctly and you have done well here. Nicely framed and sharp where it needs to be. Just losing focus at tip of beak. |
Alan C says |
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The Look |
The Look – Yup that is a very sultry look. Well captured. Good pose, background nicely oof, and looks to be well exposed. Difficult to tell if the eyes are pin sharp at this resolution but looks a good portrait to me. The tones look like they could do with a contrast boost. |
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Times Past |
Times Past – Black & white conversion looks good with a nice tonal range but it does look like it could do with a boost in contrast. B&W suits the subject well with a nice burst of light from the left side of frame. Nice image. |
Alan C says Good monochrome study with full tonal range from white to black.I found the picture a bit overpowering,perhaps lees of the picture,but centered around the gravestones would work
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Vintage Humber |
Vintage Humber – Nice car, pity about the surroundings. |
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Yellow Rose |
Yellow Rose – Lovely, delicate image. The soft focus is used to good effect here and gives the image a nice feel. A well composed and processed image. |
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Young Bird |
Young Bird – the subject is nice and sharp with good use of DoF to throw the background out of focus. I do find the brown area to the right of the bird a bit distracting though. Nicely captured image. |
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